Bill Text: NY S01381 | 2023-2024 | General Assembly | Amended


Bill Title: Requires a proposed amendment to the constitution or other question provided by law to be submitted to a statewide vote be submitted to the people for their approval in plain language which is deemed to be no higher than an eighth grade reading level.

Spectrum: Partisan Bill (Democrat 4-0)

Status: (Passed) 2023-11-17 - SIGNED CHAP.648 [S01381 Detail]

Download: New_York-2023-S01381-Amended.html



                STATE OF NEW YORK
        ________________________________________________________________________

                                         1381--A

                               2023-2024 Regular Sessions

                    IN SENATE

                                    January 11, 2023
                                       ___________

        Introduced  by  Sens. COMRIE, SKOUFIS -- read twice and ordered printed,
          and when printed to be committed to  the  Committee  on  Elections  --
          committee  discharged,  bill amended, ordered reprinted as amended and
          recommitted to said committee

        AN ACT to amend the election law, in relation to the  form  in  which  a
          proposed  amendment  to the constitution or other question provided by
          law to be submitted to a statewide vote  shall  be  submitted  to  the
          people for their approval

          The  People of the State of New York, represented in Senate and Assem-
        bly, do enact as follows:

     1    Section 1.  Paragraph d of subdivision 1 and subdivisions 2 and  3  of
     2  section  4-108  of  the  election  law, paragraph d of subdivision 1 and
     3  subdivision 2 as amended by chapter 136 of the laws of 1978 and subdivi-
     4  sion 3 as added by chapter 234 of the laws of 1976, are amended and four
     5  new subdivisions 4, 5, 6 and 7 are added to read as follows:
     6    d. In addition to the text, such transmittal shall contain an abstract
     7  of such proposed amendment, proposition or  question,  prepared  by  the
     8  state board of elections [concisely stating the purpose and effect ther-
     9  eof  in a clear and coherent manner using words with common and everyday
    10  meanings] in plain language.
    11    2. The form in which the proposed amendment, proposition  or  question
    12  is  to  be submitted shall consist [of] only [an abbreviated title indi-
    13  cating generally and briefly, and in a clear and coherent  manner  using
    14  words  with  common  and  every-day  meanings, the subject matter of the
    15  amendment, proposition or question] of the following: a.  a  descriptive
    16  title  of  up  to  fifteen  words,  which  describes the topic, goal, or
    17  outcome of the ballot question in plain language; b. a  summary  of  the
    18  text  ballot  proposal of up to thirty words, written in plain language,
    19  that describes the change in policy to be  adopted  and  not  the  legal
    20  mechanism;  and  c.  a statement of what a YES or NO vote means in up to
    21  thirty words written in plain language  that  identifies  the  practical

         EXPLANATION--Matter in italics (underscored) is new; matter in brackets
                              [ ] is old law to be omitted.
                                                                   LBD02790-03-3

        S. 1381--A                          2

     1  outcome  of  each  election  result and not the legal mechanism. If more
     2  than one such amendment, proposition or question is to be voted upon  at
     3  such election, each such amendment, proposition or question respectively
     4  shall be separately and consecutively numbered.
     5    3.  The  attorney  general  shall  advise  in the preparation of [such
     6  abstract and] such form of submission, and such recommendations shall be
     7  in plain language.
     8    4. a. The state board of elections shall prominently  publish  on  its
     9  website  at  least  four months prior to the general election at which a
    10  ballot proposal shall appear, the proposed form of the  ballot  proposal
    11  and abstract. There shall be a public comment period of at least fifteen
    12  days  subsequent  to  such publication. The state board shall review and
    13  consider public comments before adopting the final form  of  the  ballot
    14  proposal and abstract.
    15    b.  The state board of elections shall also publish on its website the
    16  Automated Readability Index score calculated pursuant to subdivision six
    17  of this section for each form of question  and abstract.
    18    The score shall require no higher than an eighth grade  reading  level
    19  (a  score  of  8  on  the Automated Readability Index), unless the state
    20  board of elections shall state the basis for its determination that  the
    21  plain language requirements of this section are met.
    22    5.  For  the  purposes  of this section, plain language shall mean the
    23  form of the ballot proposal and abstract:
    24    a. shall be written in easily comprehended, concise language;
    25    b. shall not contain more the one passive sentence;
    26    c. shall not use semicolons, using multiple  sentences  as  necessary;
    27  and
    28    d. shall not contain double negatives.
    29    6. To evaluate compliance with the plain language requirements of this
    30  section, the state board of elections shall calculate an Automated Read-
    31  ability  Index  score,  separately,  for  each  statewide form of ballot
    32  proposal and abstract.
    33    The Automated  Readability Index score shall be  calculated  according
    34  to the following formula:
    35    a. Divide the number of characters (excluding spaces) by the number of
    36  words and multiply that number by 4.71;
    37    b.  Divide the number of words by the number of sentences and multiply
    38  that number by 0.5;
    39    c. Add the results of paragraphs a and b of this subdivision.
    40    d. Subtract 21.43 from the result of paragraph c of this paragraph and
    41  round to the nearest whole number.
    42    7. No specific Automated Readability Index score  shall  be  required;
    43  provided,  however,  the  board  shall  use  best efforts to score at an
    44  eighth grade reading level or below and meet  the  definition  of  plain
    45  language  in  subdivision  five  of this section. In addition, the board
    46  shall expend their best efforts not to exceed the word limits in  subdi-
    47  vision  two of this section but may do so when plain language clarity is
    48  improved thereby.
    49    § 2. Section 4-116 of the election law, is amended  by  adding  a  new
    50  subdivision 4 to read as follows:
    51    4. No later than two months prior to the general election at which any
    52  statewide  ballot  proposal  is to be submitted to the people, the state
    53  board of elections and all local boards of elections  shall  publish  on
    54  their  websites  the  information  required  to be published pursuant to
    55  subdivision two of this section.
    56    § 3. This act shall take effect immediately.
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